Wednesday 29 November 2017

100 word challenge week #12


A kid named Jack a regular, ordinary kid until the boy had it. Jack hurried back home even though school wasn’t done yet Jack opened his garage and was drawing it on a piece of paper. The plan was… making a sandwich robot. Jack knew how it was going to be made. It would be energetic, it won’t die for 50 years because Jack taped 10 long last battery operators and made white slot inside the robot so the batteries fit inside. But if snow goes inside the robot it will self destruct and can blow anything up from a mile away and hurts people.

1 comment:

  1. star: Good job varying sentence lengths.
    wish: Make sure your writing isn't switching from past, present and future
    wish: It is hard to understand what is going on in your writing.

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