When it was christmas eve we ate dinner you know having that good turkey with the family. We always celebrate christmas but i was very tired from swimming. I asked to go to bed. Sooner or later
everyone was asleep...when the sun rose i bolted down the stairs...nothing was there no presents the
flame was still in the fireplace everything in my eyes went white...then i started crying ... Mom and Dad came down stairs...they also noticed no presents Mom said to please stop crying but i didn't stop.
Dad said santa might have skip a day maybe tomorrow is christmas. maybe next year
Hello Crackedegg,
ReplyDeleteThe prompt words are fairly well spread out in your writing; remember to highlight them before you publish. Always capitalize the word 'I'. Also, take out all '...' from your writing. You would benefit from word processing your story in a 'Word' document first, then copying and pasting it into your blog. 'Word' will help you realize where you have made spelling and punctuation errors. Congratulations on completing the 100 Word Challenge Week #8.
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Mrs. Van